For the feedback i brought a mockup of titles on each page and numbers so i could work out where my tru grain would be slotted into place. I brought with me a printed mockup with titles quotes and spaces on the document where the text and images would be placed. I also brought four packaging mockup designs.
Feedback i received-
STRENGTHS
- Blue print & Packaging idea - Good gives it theory.
- Tru Grain showing structure in even 'messiest' patterns
- Font is very geometrical try Futura?
- Love the envelope idea with blue print inside - works well with theme/content think style is very consistent - true grain layout + packaging.
- Use of try grain shows knowledge of theory & Blue printing packaging
AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT
- I think its good that you have a smaller ratio of body copy to image/pattern. Let the patterns do more of the talking but it is good to have info.
- Would add pagination. Have you thought about colour?
CONSIDERATIONS
- Try spiral bind maybe? Japanese stab bind
- Make sure grids are different
- Layout of book/pages could follow grid on tru grain example 'symmetry , page , reflection repeat patterns sections'
- Think about different columns/white space when you add text so it isn't too bulky
- Could add small patterns round pages - over lapping text/image - could add more interesting element.
- How are you going to take this further for next thing?
Reflect on the type of feedback we received.
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