Responsive - Final Feedback Session

RESPONSIVE - FINAL FEEDBACK SESSION

At the beginning of the session sitting with collaborative partners we put our work out onto the table and went around the other tables leaving feedback with post-it notes. A common piece of feedback Beth and i received was 

some pixilation luckily that was only in something printed which we only photographed so the pixilation wasn't an issue. We received a lot of positive feedback which made me Beth pleased as we had put a lot of time into the brief.

My Asos , secret 7 & monotype boards -

The next part of the session in our small groups we looked at the criteria on the learning outcomes and wrote down what we thought each category meant in relation to our blogs and work.

5A4 - Research how it informs your design

5B3 - Trying different ideas/development

5C3 - Problems faced - how we rectified it

5D3 - How we planned our time/meeting deadlines.

We also wrote down what we like to received feedback for:

• Boards are effective?

• Consistency ?

• How do people evidence work load?

3 outcomes 

How ?

Have they?

Enough evidence available?

We next made a list as a big group and Fred wrote down some of the key points on the board-

• Have you responded to the brief?

• If not why ?

• Visual quality how does it look? Technical ability

• Suggestions for improvement & why ? ( Blog in detail)

• Evaluation of work - what works what doesn't and why ?

After we made these points we got into pairs around the table and looked at each others work.

We considered these factors above when we crited other peoples work. I will also take note of these factors and use them as a check list when getting my work together for submission.

My feedback - 

FIRST SHEET

Effective layout of boards:

Strengths 

• Mood boards introduce you to the brand and explain its nature.

• Good impact on first board

• Structured layouts are effective

• Descriptive journeys of design process (less text though)

Suggestions

• Reduce body copy

• Show us not tell us

Project management

• Decent amount of work completed a professional standard A*

Have you answered the brief?

• A strong response that excels the deliverables

Visual Quality

• I like the pattern

• Very strong branding which is consistent throughout.

SECOND SHEET

Effective layout of boards:

Strengths 

• Boards are generally consistent throughout apart from research and reference the layout on that board works so could be a style to adapt throughout.

Suggestions

• Circular layout

• Maybe too much text on interactive experience & concept page.

Project management

• Very good - lots of work

Have you answered the brief?

• Yes thoroughly & effectively with amount of work

Visual Quality

• Excellent.