We first re-touched on the previous talk before Christmas.
- This session is not so much what you've produced its how you respond & communicate to the audience.
- showing backup work & evidence.
- What we look for when criting?
How well does the work presented communicate the concept/product/context?
- Does the solution answer the brief?
- Are the methods of distribution appropriate?
- Is the concept clear & appropriate?
- Have decisions been made from an informed point of view?
- Is there a clear audience & is the solution appropriate to them?
These are the four boards i brought for the crit.
They were for concept , Research & Audience , Designs & Distribution/Range.
Feedback i received:
Its a positive message , not a guilt trip. Push ' Mind body & soul ' Re-invent yourself.
Answers to the questions in relation to crit discussions:
1. Yes its appropriate its obvious & positive design.
2. Gym good idea , maybe holland & barrat , spas or organic places.
3. Yes , obvious design quote says enough.
4. Yes cleverly thought out - Refreshing
5. Yes applicable to the audience.
Where am i now how can i push it further?
2 weeks time - Bring Final body shop
BRING
- Design boards Final Body Shop A3 Colour
- Font colour , Collateral & Development
- Visual over text.
- Research /Variations
- Printed A3 5
- Other Briefs (can be presented digitally)
- The actual original brief
- Questions to guide Feedback 5-6
- 200 words summative evaluation.
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